a learning heart

a learning heart

roberto, he says
r’s a dancing swirl

roberto, I try
r’s heavy and stiff

he chuckles, I giggle
laughter a language
with no teacher

roberto lets me
taste his r’s
I let roberto
temper my tongue

© hannah t

 

Notes:
Working on expanding this piece into a longer poem or a short story.

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Published in: on January 18, 2011 at 2:17 pm  Comments (6)  

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6 CommentsLeave a comment

  1. fun flow..
    Thanks for sharing…

    A+

    • Thanks Jingle :) I enjoyed the Poetry Potluck.

  2. cute…
    love your word choice.

    welcome sharing your poems with our poetry potluck today..

    you can link in 1 to 3 old poems or poems unrelated to our theme as first time participant, have fun.

    you got talent, keep it up.

    • Hi Jingle Poetry, thank you :) Ooo that’s great; I’ll do that now. Thanks for the encouragement!

  3. cute one, laughter and love dont have any language barrier.

    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/01/14/free-soul-14th-january-2011/

    • Thanks Trisha! Absolutely :)


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