you go right ahead
fill your bowl with crystal rings
gild your ham with gold
adorn your toast with black pearls
I’ll sit here, stir my oatmeal

© hannah t

Published in: on March 15, 2011 at 6:41 pm  Comments (6)  

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  1. what a contrast, well played,
    enjoy your oatmeal…

    smiles, love this kind of lessons,

    • thank you, jingle!

      me too, i was so delighted when i first learned the “stir the oatmeal” phrase :))

  2. Vivid imagery. Excellent ending lines.

    • Thank you! :)

  3. Nice! Pure. Simple. Nice!

    Well done for Potluck. Poem on …

    • Thanks Jamie! :)

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