tub, bed, spoon

tub, bed, spoon

they say you are vanilla
like it’s a dirty word
what do they know?

you play well with others
sprinkle of spice, dash of dark
even chocolate

you complete my cravings
hit all my sweet spots
leave me dripping cream

they say you are vanilla
like it’s a dirty word
what do they know?

© hannah t

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on March 15, 2011 at 6:44 pm Comments (22)

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On March 15, 2011 at 9:29 pm Jingle said:

fun wonders.
well done.
A++

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- On March 16, 2011 at 1:08 am hannah said:
  
  I had too much fun writing this ;) Thank you!
  
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On March 15, 2011 at 10:10 pm bendedspoon said:

i’m afraid i have a dirty mind for enjoying this cool vanilla :)

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- On March 16, 2011 at 1:12 am hannah said:
  
  Vanilla chooses to be white so it may be stained. Thank you for licking! :)
  
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On March 16, 2011 at 12:41 am fiveloaf said:

lovely.. here’s my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/cheesecake/

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- On March 16, 2011 at 1:13 am hannah said:
  
  Thank you, fiveloaf! I see cheesecake; must go read now :)
  
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On March 16, 2011 at 1:48 am NotATameLion said:

I really enjoyed this one. Though I am afraid I may be imagining things into this poem so playfully written. Thank you for sharing.

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- On March 16, 2011 at 2:09 am hannah said:
  
  Thank you, it was my pleasure :) Imagine away!
  
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On March 16, 2011 at 2:09 am Rajlakshmi said:

that sounds delicious :D
lovely write

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- On March 16, 2011 at 2:13 am hannah said:
  
  Ice cream never disappoints :)
  
  Thank you, Rajlakshmi!
  
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On March 16, 2011 at 4:30 am liv2write2day said:

Reading this makes me want to get up and go get some ice cream. You achieved the desired effect if you’re looking to be a temptress. Very nice writing, Hannah.

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- On March 16, 2011 at 5:23 am hannah said:
  
  I hope you get some ;) Thank you for popping in!
  
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On March 16, 2011 at 6:06 am Joanna said:

Rubba-dub-dub, ice cream and a tub. Delicious image.

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- On March 16, 2011 at 6:14 am hannah said:
  
  :)) Thank you, Joanna!
  
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On March 16, 2011 at 9:25 am North Texas Haiku said:

We all could learn to be a bit more like vanilla and get along with the other flavors. This works one many levels, well done!

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- On March 16, 2011 at 7:14 pm hannah said:
  
  Indeed! Thank you :)
  
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On March 17, 2011 at 11:01 am lunawitch15 said:

:) awesome!

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- On March 17, 2011 at 6:04 pm hannah said:
  
  :)) thank you!
  
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On March 19, 2011 at 3:59 pm Jamie Dedes said:

Bravo. Indeed. What do they know?

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- On March 19, 2011 at 6:22 pm hannah said:
  
  I’m starting to wonder if we’ll ever get an answer!
  
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On March 25, 2011 at 6:30 pm Olivia said:

What do they really know? haha
Oh well, Vanilla made me think….. ;)

Hugs xxx

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- On March 27, 2011 at 4:57 am hannah said:
  
  I’ll make an announcement if they tell me! :))
  
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