(un)ruffled

(un)ruffled

grace on surface
picture of poise, careless calm
beneath, frantic feet

© hannah t

Published in: on March 23, 2011 at 7:00 pm  Comments (10)  

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  1. On March 24, 2011 at 12:50 am Jingle said:

    apt rhymes..
    :)
    A++

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    • On March 24, 2011 at 2:13 am hannah said:

      Thank you, Jingle :))

      Reply
  2. On March 24, 2011 at 2:26 am Vinay said:

    a haiku can speak a lot, can’t it? it speaks to me of hidden sorrows beneath a placid face that masks it all. loved it!

    Here’s My Potluck

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    • On March 24, 2011 at 2:34 am hannah said:

      Hidden sorrows, struggles…that’s absolutely what I was writing about :) Thank you, Vinay!

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  3. On March 24, 2011 at 7:49 am bendedspoon said:

    A big story behind those words. We can’t wail all the time no matter how much we are bleeeeeeding inside. I surprised myself too when I was able to be poised back then… :)

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    • On March 24, 2011 at 2:33 pm hannah said:

      :)) I suppose it’s a good thing we can’t wail all the time, it would be very tiring for the body and everyone in the vicinity.

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  4. On March 25, 2011 at 9:57 pm promising poets parking lot said:

    keep it up.

    Welcome joining poets rally week 40,
    all submissions will be fully represented by the end of the week,
    visit me for details today.. hope to see you in..

    Cheers.
    Happy Writing..
    xx

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    • On March 27, 2011 at 4:58 am hannah said:

      I think I’ll be sticking to Poetry Potluck for now, but thank you for the invitation :) Happy writing to you too!

      Reply
  5. On March 26, 2011 at 11:57 pm Luke Prater said:

    Lovely haiku. Much said in a few words :)

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    • On March 27, 2011 at 4:59 am hannah said:

      :) Thanks Luke, and thanks for popping in!

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