consecrated

consecrated

she waited for me
for six years
I came
left an angry scar
deep and long tale
that cannot mar
the beauty of birth

I’m still here
after twenty-three years
leaving scars
on her heart
she’s still here
after twenty-three years
loving me
with a mother’s hati

© hannah t

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  1. On February 14, 2011 at 10:32 pm Jingle said:

    mother alike love is unconditional.

    cool love piece.
    A+

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    • On February 15, 2011 at 2:26 am hannah said:

      Absolutely, a mother’s love is beautiful. Thank you :)

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  2. On February 15, 2011 at 12:39 am BUTTERFLIES OF TIME said:

    Nothing compares to a mother’s love and patience. U hit on the nail! she is always there ever and forever.

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    • On February 15, 2011 at 2:38 am hannah said:

      Indeed, and few are more blessed than those loved by a mother :)

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  3. On February 15, 2011 at 3:19 am Scent of my heart said:

    Any mother should be proud to read this lovely poem! I’m glad to see you at Potluck Hannah! Happy days!

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    • On February 15, 2011 at 3:25 am hannah said:

      Thank you, Blaga, and happy to see you too! I’m planning to show it to my mum soon :)

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  4. On February 15, 2011 at 10:22 pm fiveloaf said:

    you made all mothers proud- too bad i am a man haha! here’s my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/

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    • On February 16, 2011 at 12:34 am hannah said:

      Haha your comment made me chuckle. Sorry about the bias!

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  5. On February 15, 2011 at 11:56 pm Gerry/Strummed Words said:

    As a mother, I love your poem :)

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    • On February 16, 2011 at 12:39 am hannah said:

      Thank you, Gerry :))

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  6. On March 7, 2011 at 12:47 am Jingle said:

    Greetings:

    Thanks a lot for your contribution to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I am placing your link to our blogroll within two days, hope to see you share your poetry with us tonight…

    Always, your input is valued…
    Happy Sunday!
    Love, xx

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    • On March 7, 2011 at 5:49 am hannah said:

      Hi Jingle! That is really sweet, thank you, and thank you for always being encouraging and supportive :) Happy weekend to you too!

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